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Michael Spencer's avatar

Ah yes, you know my style of reading already.

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Claudia Befu's avatar

By the way, this is just a teaser for a whole novel that happens in 3600 CE. It's in the making. I'm now writing the prequel of that world: https://www.storyvoyager.com/t/there-is-hope

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Michael Spencer's avatar

I love it!

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Claudia Befu's avatar

This just made my day! Going now to edit my next story!

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Claudia Befu's avatar

Thanks, Michael! 💚

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Nick Winney's avatar

Really liked this. its always a smile inducing moment when you experience the creativity of others and you know that you personally would never have come up with that specific idea...that way of writing about something... but you recognise the way that mind is working and see yourslef in it. good luck with your work Claudia!

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Claudia Befu's avatar

Thanks Nick, I like the way you look at things, seeing a piece of fiction as an incursion into someone's mind. This makes me think and I'll probably start looking at fiction with different eyes...

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Mark Starlin's avatar

Fascinating world. Seems like a possible direction humans are heading.

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Claudia Befu's avatar

Thanks for reading, Mark, and for your feedback. It is the setup for a novel for which I already have a first draft in the shape of a screenplay. Happy to hear that the world seems realistic. I was going for that.

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