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Dr. Levent Mollamustafaoğlu's avatar

I know this was released more than a year ago but it took me a while to discover it. Excellent introduction to the all-too-possible future world. It raised my interest and I wanted to find out what is happening next...

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Taegan MacLean's avatar

Really well done Claudia. I hope you’re proud of this accomplishment. World-building is not easy, it takes such a fine balance, and I think you pulled it off.

The tone of the world reminded me a little of Nausicaä of the Valley of the Wind. The dry landscape and the creatures that inhabit it.

Only comment on the constructive side may be something you do in Part 2, but having a returning side character, someone with a clear vibe that helps ground the story and offer a touch point throughout the journey.

But yeah, that’s just a minor thing. Descriptions popped with visuals and the dialogue was helpful.

Great work! Make sure to have a nice meal or drink to celebrate.

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