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Larry Hogue's avatar

Nice cliffhanger! It intrigues me that they lack for a lot of basic needs, but they still have electronic tech.

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Nathan Slake's avatar

Great continuation, Claudia, and you seemed to have selected another excellent point at which to end the chapter. Lots of suspense with the ending! I really like it. Also, I appreciated having the little bit of exposition done in a believable and logical manner, with Shia explaining how she got there and what she was doing. It's good to have come through parts of those stories you've posted here and then see that summary from Shia herself. Nice work.

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