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This is haunting! Really great dialogue especially. Nicely done, Claudia!

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Thanks, Kathleen! I'm especially happy about your feedback on the dialogue. It's been a weakness for me for a long time.

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This story is picking up steam!

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Thanks, Larry! 🙌 It’s a story that doesn’t lend itself very well to serialization but 10k is too long for a single newsletter. I’m happy this second part was more engaging.

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