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Johnathan Reid's avatar

Excellent world-building! I can feel the dust and grit in my mouth. The contrast between the two populations is also brought out well. To make it easier to follow who is speaking, try starting a new paragraph whenever the speaker changes.

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Nathan Slake's avatar

Great piece, Claudia. I love having the character crossovers from your other CliFi posts.

Super workdbuilding as always. There's enough information here to feed the narrative, but not too much that it saturated. I really like that. Great job. Love the opening and closing lines, they're really strong bookends to the piece!

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